[Archived] New Hero Ideas I! (READ THE OP)

[stevenm2727]

*snip*

Wow, I just think that passive is WAAAAY OP. It gives you halved damage from the side and 25% dodge chance increase? That's just insane in my opinion. Oh, and maybe decrease the damage from his basic attack. And maybe either change the squad's name or just change it completely. Just my opinion, but yeah :3

[jstrutt2000]

I would either reduce the halved dmg to 25%, or reduce the dodge chance to none. but i'm defininatly not going to change the squad name.

kk, thx.

[jstrutt2000]

Bastille
The Quantum Cage
Quantum
Tempest

Bio: Bastille was a cop on infinity, and she stopped several crimes. but the one crime she could not stop was the darkspore invasion. after she finished her last crime the darkspore invaded and tried to take her down, but she was quick, she put all her police gear on, and readied the the weapon, what was her weapon? a gun, obviously.

She was outnumbered, by much. she shot 2 times, killed one darkspore, then multiple times, until she ran out of ammo, she took out a baton and whacked the darksproe while they were killing citizens, but, that wasnt quite a good idea. she was being chased by some darkspore, when all of a sudden she tripped :O
she poked its eye with the baton and ran off. she hid in a nearby building and wated when all of a sudden, gloves fell from the cieling, they were glowing blue. she put them on.

she put her baton away and walked outside and punched a darkspore in the face. another tackled her from behind, it grabbed her leg, she held out her hands trying to block, the darkspore ripped off her arm, then chewed on her leg. she was screaming in pain, but all of a sudden. something struck her mind. all her years in training granted a huge advantage. she pulled out her hand cuffs with herback two arms, and cuffed the darkspores mouth closed. she got up with 1 leg and 3 arms left, and punched the darkspore in the face, while anther jumped at her.

her gloves started glowing blue. she ripped the cuffs off of the darkspore with its jaw attached, and threw it at the one that tackled her, and then another jumped down and, before it could land it had it's heart ripped out and pulled through its back, Bastille thew the heart back as she dissapeared into the fog of the burning village.

on the other side, lied a crogenitor, Crogenitor Suzu. waiting for bastilles arrival. as bastille walked out of the fog, Suzu asked Bastille if she would join the resistance against the darkspore. Bastille frowned as she said, "I'm not powerful, all i have are these hand cuffs and a bitten baton." but Suzu told her that she also had the gloves of Quantum Powers. she was able to shoot Energy spheres out of her hands and Lock-down everthing around her.
Bastille disagreed. she sadly said. "I have to stay here and help my town, also, i have no idea how to use those powers. It would be great, but i can't, i'm sorry." and Bastille walked away into the sunset.

But Suzu knew she was made to live in the life of a hero. so Suzu followed Bastille across the ruins.


Appearance:
Bastille is unique, she has 4 arms 2 in the proper place, 2 sprouting from the back and slighty under her arms then a wavy spine and two, dinosaur-like, legs. kind of like the stetopiggy legs in spore, or cankle. then she has her head located where vipers head is located, and she is a tall figure.

Weapons:
Onslaught: Gravity gloves
Invasion: Jailing Gloves
Apocalypse: Casting Gloves


ABILITIES:

Base Attack:
Hand Sphere (until i find a better one)

Bastille Puts both hands outwards towards the enemy and has his hands facing the enemy, Bastille fires a Black sphere that glows blue towards the enemy.
Deals 6 - 8 dmg and slows their movement speed by 10%, movement speed stacks to 4 times, if it hits four times, the target is stunned for 2 seconds and suffers 3 dmg. the enemy can only be suppressed once every 9 seconds. Has a 4 hit combo, 1st hit is left hand, 2nd is right, 3rd is both dealing double dmg and 4 is both but homing and double dmg.


Unique Ability:
Lock-Down

Bastille Stuns all enemies around her for 3 seconds, if a target is killed during it, it increases the time by 0.5 , also, enemies cannot dodge or resist his attacks. if the time somehow reaches 10 seconds, then the cooldown is reset and you get all your power back. cannot be dodge or resisted.

Variant Abilities:
A Shooting Star
B Time Bubble
D Celestial Comet
G Dimensional Rift

Squad Ability:
Wormhole

Bastille Sends himself through a wormhole warping him to a random place on the screen and then deals 15 - 20 dmg to all enemies around him, if their is no enemies, he warps around again to another place, until 3 times, if there is no enemies on the third warp, then the ability stops.


Passive ability:
Chains On You

Everything within 2 meters of bastille is suppressed.

Abolist
The Devils Descendant
Plasma
Tempest

Bio: Coming soon


Appearance: Coming soon
Weapon:

Onslaught: Firelance
Invasion: Swiftlance
Apocalypse: Fusionlance

ABILITIES:

Base Attack:
Swift Spear
Abolist Stabs the enemy with his lance, The first hit dealing 11 - 13 dmg, and the second hit too, and on the third hit it definite crits and has a 5% chance to set the enemy on fire, the fire deals 1 DPS and lasts 4 seconds

Unique ability:
Furnace
Abolist heats everything up around him, Dealing 18 - 28 dmg to everyone within 5m of Abolist and also applies the burn from the base attack.

Variant Abilities:
A Webbed lightning
B Flame surge
D Meteor strike
G Electron sphere

Squad Ability
Death Aura
Any thing around Abolist That dies will give him and his teammates 1% of their total health back. This effects lasts 7 seconds

Passive Ability:
Devils Fury
Every DoT Applies to Abolist will heal him instead of damage him.
Overdrive: every DoT applied to abolist will also heal team mates.

NOTES:
Abolist is a very good match to viper, considering vipers attacks all do a poison, so viper would heal abolist while damaging him.

[Terminal_6]

DOUBLE POST??!?!?!?!?!?!

Just kidding. No one really even cares about that.

[jstrutt2000]

I'm Reserving these names.

Maelstro
The Tidal Flames

Terraling
The Stone Giant
Bio Sentinel

Bio: Later

Appearance: Later
Weapons: Stone Fist

ABILITIES:

Base Attack:
Rockfist
Deals 6 - 8 physical dmg to the target, aswell as 2 - 4 dmg to anyone within 2 meters of the target.
Combos to 3 times, 1st time he strikes with his left hand, 2nd, his right, and third, both, but slams them as the thumb is at the top, and together. the third hit knocks the enemies back.

Unique Ability:
Stoneforce
Terraling turns all debuffs on his team mates and him into buffs.

example: + 15% energy dmg dealt to the user turns into - 15% energy dmg dealt to the user
or 15 dmg per second turns into 15 heal per second.

Get it?

Variant Abilities:
A Vines
B Enrage
D Roar
G Sprite

Squad Ability:
Yield
Terraling Stop what hes doing and lets a rock shield form around him, and lets the darkspore attack him, but every time the darkspore attack him the damage reflects back. and he suffers no dmg. lasts until 35 dmg has been deflected.

Passive Ability:
Forever Alive
If Terraling dies, his squad members can still use his ability. and if a team mates hero is dead, that ability is replaced with terralings squad until they come back. and if two heroes die, the unique ability add to them aswell.

Skorch
The Fiery Force

[Terminal_6]

Snakeroot, the Burrowing Menace
Male Bio Ravager

Bio: Snakeroot's species, the Alakrmites, spend most of their time underground. Snakeroot was no exception. Like all, he slept 12 hours a day, gathering nutrients from the soil. Snakeroot led a normal life, nothing strange in particular ever happened, and he had no exceptional power. If anything, he was scrawny and not even to bright. That is, until the Darkspore arrived. When the mines crashed down on Verdanth, they tore up the land, uncovering Alakrmite burrows and other underground structures. Snakeroot burrowed deeper, following his kin. However, in panic, they scrambled and lost their sense of direction. They split up, and Snakeroot was forced to follow his instincts. He traveled under a hard, solid object, seeking protection. When the Darkspore barrage lifted, Snakeroot climbed upward, and burrowed straight through a hole in the steel floor of Crogenitor Astra's laboratory. Several cables and pipes had been ruptured, and loose documents were scattered everywhere. In the dim light, provided by sparks and florescent chemicals, Snakeroot could still navigate. However, a vat containing a solution of E-DNA and various chemicals sprang a leak. Its contents oozed out, and covered the floor. It seeped into Snakeroot's bloodstream through an open cut, and he immediately felt it. The E-DNA had already interacted with pollen and various flora samples. They flourished on Snakeroot's dirt caked skin, and sprouted immediately. Before long, Snakeroot was entangled in vines and roots that took over his body. Exhausted, he gave up and fainted on the floor.
Snakeroot woke struggling with the vines. He decided to take it a bit slowly, and sat, watching the vines and plants grow. The hole in the floor he had come through was now covered with thick foliage and thorns. Snakeroot desperately wished they would disappear. And they did, snaking back into the soil. In awe, Snakeroot tried to take command of other plants. Those in his body receded, freeing him.
When Snakeroot emerged, he found his home planet swarming with Darkspore, corrupting everything in their path. Ok, you know what happens next, so I'm not going to bother explaining.
Snakeroot has control over plant life. And because he's a burrowing creature, he integrates it into his attacks, using ambush tactics.
Appearance: Similar to a platypus, but without the beak. His hands and feet have four razor sharp claws each.
Weapon: Claws
Basic Attack: Instinctive Slash --- Snakeroot slashes with his claws, dealing low damage with a 1/4 second cooldown. His basic attack can chain 5 hits. First slashing with his right claw, then his second. Then he whirls around and slashes at the enemy with his foot, twice. Finally, he jumps backward and pounces the target. This final attack deals double damage.

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Unique Ability: Unseen Menace --- Snakeroot burrows underground. During this time, he is invisible to enemies and can burrow under obstacles. EXAMPLE: Snakeroot burrows underground, and passes under an Ancient totem. Snakeroot can stay underground for four seconds before surfacing. Upon surfacing, Snakeroot kncks back all enemies in a 2 meter radius, dealing medium damage. This abilitiy does not work on man/machine made surfaces, such as Infinity factories. 6 second cooldown.

Variant Abilities:
A Vines
B Enrage
G Sprite
D Roar

Squad ability: Entangle --- Hero fires a long vine at the enemy, dealing high damage and rooting them. 3 second cooldown.

Passive Ability: Camouflage: All enemies have a 20% decrease in awareness.

[Impious_Iron]

Name: Gorrigan

Title: The Grimdark Paladin

Genesis: Necro

Class: Sentinel

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Biography: In friendlier times on Nocturna, Gorrigan was a simple-minded and timid farmhand on one of the fungal farms in Nocturni Legion territory, born into his caste where he would remain for life. Because most life on Nocturna was far too dangerous to hunt, the bio-luminescent fungi on Nocturna was the chief source of food. The Legion held the farmers of Nocturna in high regard and treated them with respect, and Gorrigan often played with the children of Legion soldiers as they passed through his home village, learning basic combat techniques through play.

Gorrigan's life was simple like any other farmhand's, and he enjoyed a surprisingly peaceful existence for a Nocturni. Having grown up alongside Legion soldiers for so long, Gorrigan gradually learned how to use farming equipment as a weapon as he grew older, and it was through his quick decision-making that he managed to help defend his village from a sudden Animus attack. Little did Gorrigan know that this had been his family's doing: Before his birth, his mother and father had performed an Immaculate Pledge before the Dark Gods of the Rift, giving their souls up in exchange for a new destiny for their unborn son. They did not know what his fate would be, only that it would be a different path than the simple farm life of their caste.

It was one afternoon years later that Gorrigan heard that a large-scale battle had broken out on the fringe of Nocturni Legion territory, and that he had been conscripted into the Legion army. Gorrigan felt confident in his abilities, despite never having received any official combat training, and embarked with many of the village's other combat-capable adults onto the battlefield. He was far from prepared for what he would face there: A burning field soaked with Nocturni gore, the roar of the flames drowned out by the screams of the dying. Over the ramparts swarmed a never-ending river of unrecognizable monstrosities, their deformed features warped further by the gloom. They tore apart the Legion without end, stopping in between battles to feed on their own dead and wounded. Upon confronting the first Darkspore on Nocturna, Gorrigan did the only sensible thing: He fled.

What Gorrigan found upon returning to his village brought him to his knees. There was no village left, only devastation. Huts burned to ashes in the gloom, and monsters devoured screaming families alive in the streets. In the course of a few hours, Gorrigan's peaceful life had become an anguished nightmare. His fragile mind couldn't handle such a drastic change, and something crucial within him snapped. As he watched a monstrosity tear a child from her mother's arms and feast upon her, an acute, morbid rage exploded within Gorrigan - something animalistic, something ancient. It was time for the Dark Gods to collect their payment, and they made their presence in Gorrigan's body known.

Before the Darkspore commander that had killed the girl could react, his spine had been torn out of his back and run through his throat. Roaring at the top of his bleeding lungs, Gorrigan swept through the village with psychotic fury. Within minutes, the rest of the village had been razed, along with everything in it. Something new and terrible emerged from the flames. Clad in the armor once worn by a Legion general and pulsing with ungodly forces, a hellish knight marched forward. Stopping to kneel before what remained of his home and farmland, Gorrigan made a promise in a language he did not know.

He would destroy them all.

The Dark Gods urging him forward, Gorrigan disappeared into the darkness, untold devastation following in his blood soaked wake.


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Appearance:


Weapon:
Rift Lance

Void Spear
Null Impaler


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Attacks and Abilities


Basic: Violent Jab____8-16 damage_____1 sec cooldown_____No energy cost____7m range_____Instant: Gorrigan quickly and violently thrusts forward with his lance repeatedly, dealing physical damage to a single target. Enemies directly behind the target within the attack's range will take the same amount of damage as the target. Every five attacks, Gorrigan will roar and charge forward, knocking back a single enemy.


Unique: Soul Shackle______No damage_____10 sec cooldown______8m range_____20 energy____Instant: Gorrigan targets an enemy. For 4 seconds, five enemies within 5m of the target will take 50% of the damage inflicted on the original target regardless of their location.


Variant Abilities:

Alpha: Soul Link

Beta: Soul Siphon

Gamma: Phantom Charge

Delta: Affliction Bolt


Squad: Fury of the Rift____12-25 damage_____8 sec cooldown_____25 energy________Channeled: Writhes in agony for two seconds before expelling 7 demonic spirits. The spirits randomly target a single enemy each and inflict energy damage, as well as Haste and Terror for 3 seconds. If a spirit does not have an enemy to attack, they will follow the hero until a target enters their field of vision. If an enemy isn't sighted within 4 seconds, the spirits will return to the hero's body.


Passive: Unbridled Forces: Gorrigan builds up tremendous force in his body. Every 8 seconds, he will release energy in the form of a shockwave that knocks back enemies within 2m for two seconds. Overdive: Releases power every 2 seconds.

[jstrutt2000]

Snakeroot, Thats an awesome name.

[Inquisitor_Laine]

Name: Gorrigan

Title: The Grimdark Paladin

Genesis: Necro

Class: Sentinel

Instant win.

I almost want to steal him for the fan-stuffs I'm writing, hehe.

In the entirety, truly awesome, very inspiring ;D.

My only comment that goes in the other direction? Slap a duration on Fury of the Rift. The way I read it (at the moment) is I could just channel a mass of spirits 'then' pull a large pack or a boss & just troll it...while fun, I'd have issues with that XD.

[Terminal_6]

Snakeroot, Thats an awesome name.

Lol I just looked up exotic plants that was one of them.

[Impious_Iron]

Name: Gorrigan

Title: The Grimdark Paladin

Genesis: Necro

Class: Sentinel

Instant win.

I almost want to steal him for the fan-stuffs I'm writing, hehe.

In the entirety, truly awesome, very inspiring ;D.

My only comment that goes in the other direction? Slap a duration on Fury of the Rift. The way I read it (at the moment) is I could just channel a mass of spirits 'then' pull a large pack or a boss & just troll it...while fun, I'd have issues with that XD.

Glad you like him! Feel free to use him however you want. I think I will slap a duration on Fury of the Rift though, I was actually thinking about that in the first place.

[stevenm2727]

Base Attack:
Needs a name, Any suggestions?

Bastille Puts both hands outwards towards the enemy and has his hands facing the enemy, Bastille fires a Black sphere that glows blue towards the enemy.
Deals 6 - 8 dmg and slows their movement speed by 10%, movement speed stacks to 4 times, if it hits four times, the target is stunned for 2 seconds and suffers 3 dmg. the enemy can only be suppressed once every 9 seconds. Has a 4 hit combo, 1st hit is left hand, 2nd is right, 3rd is both dealing double dmg and 4 is both but homing and double dmg.

Hmmm, how about Temporal Sphere? Kinda lame, but whatever. Well, I just have to critique everything don't I Really, all I can say about this one is lower the movement speed debuff to 5%, remove the double damage, because really, that's doing quadruple the normal damage. I think double is enough. That is all

[BrotherDog]

Name: Gorrigan

Title: The Grimdark Paladin

Genesis: Necro

Class: Sentinel

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Biography: In friendlier times on Nocturna, Gorrigan was a simple-minded and timid farmhand on one of the fungal farms in Nocturni Legion territory, born into his caste where he would remain for life. Because most life on Nocturna was far too dangerous to hunt, the bio-luminescent fungi on Nocturna was the chief source of food. The Legion held the farmers of Nocturna in high regard and treated them with respect, and Gorrigan often played ...

...up tremendous force in his body. Every 8 seconds, he will release energy in the form of a shockwave that knocks back enemies within 2m for two seconds. Overdive: Releases power every 2 seconds.

Great hero except for one minor/major-ish(depending on who you talk to at the time) thing. His weapon and his general look is too much like Wraith. He'd be called a Wraith-clone even though he's different.

[jstrutt2000]

Instant Win

Great hero except for one minor/major-ish(depending on who you talk to at the time) thing. His weapon and his general look is too much like Wraith. He'd be called a Wraith-clone even though he's different.

Agreed.
I was originally going to use a team ability like Gorrigan Squad on Flaroes until i remembered that she was supposed to be a healer.

[Meatkill]

Chianin, the Botanical Phoenix
Type:sentinel
Genesis:Bio-Plasma

Bio: Chianin was a powerful soldier even before the Darkspore invaded his home planet of Arcterrion. He always survived, and was very cunning. But when the Darkspore invaded, he was clearly outmatched. Seeing his fellow soldiers fall one by one, he had to flee. Then, he met someone lying on the ground, a Crogenitor. He tried to get him up and bring him to the medic, but he said,"No. Leave me here. I can help you. just leave me here." the Crogenitor touched his forehead, then dies. Chianin suddenly feels a power surge in his veins like nothing he ever experienced. His Bio powers have awakened, and by just looking at the Darkspore. Giant vines started growing around them, and slammed them to pieces! in discovering his new powers, he went to join the Crogenitor Resistance, to find like-minded heroes and free his home.
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Appearance:
Weapon:Lightning Cannon

ABILITIES-----------------------------
Basic attack:
Plamatic Blast- Chinian shoots a fast homing lightning ball at his enemy.
Unique ability:
Roots of Wrath- Ginat roots grow near enemies and attack them.
Variant ability:
Alpha- Ring of Fire: Chinian launches methane gas around him, snaps his fingers, then everything within 20 meters is incinerated.
Beta- Thorn Storm: Chinian launches giant thorns that rain down on enemies.
Gamma- Rootreach: Chinian grabs an enemy, and throws it at another enemy, and they both take massive damage.
Delta- Point Blank: chinian charges at an enemy, then point-blank shoots that enemy.
Squad ability:
Assimilation: Chinian breaths a gas that turns an enemy that breathes it into an miniature clone of him, aiding in battle, and may also assimilate other enemies. This process may be endless, so knock yourself out. But it uses a LOT of power.
Passive ability:
Nuclear Blood: If Chinian were to die, he will explode violently, annihilating almost any enemy onscreen.

[stevenm2727]

Could we get a link for the adventure, Meatkill?

[Mysteryem]

Could we get a link for the adventure, Meatkill?

Isn't the actual image itself the adventure? Just drag and drop into spore don't you?

[Meatkill]

Xhonas, The Lightning Amazon
Type:ravager
Genesis:Quantum-Cyber

Bio: Xhonas comes from a species of all-female Cyber-Quantum beings with great intellect and are followers of Spode. But when the Darkspore invaded her home planet of Carakus-α, she had to go into hiding. She searched the archives of her empire and learned about the Crogenitors.She traveled to Infinity on her starship, the Darkstar, and told the Crogenitors her story. By the time they upgraded her natural Quantum powers, the Darkspore are already beginning to invade Infinity. She had to flee from the planet and return to her home to tell her empire of the bad news. By the time she returned home, it was already too late.

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Appearance:
Weapon:Fists

ABILITIES-----------------------------
Basic attack
Roundhouse Punch: Xhonas does a powerful uppercut.
Unique ability
Gravitic Blast: Xhonas launches an explosive projectile that explodes depending on the enemy.
*Minion: Normal Explosion
*Lieutenant: Big Explosion
*Mini-Boss: Huge Explosion, then gravity shockwave
*Destructor: MASSIVE Explosion, then a black hole appears, sucking everyhing toward it, lasting 20 seconds before going nova and creates one last shockwave.
*The Corruptor: Same as Destructor, but black hole is stronger, lasts 30 seconds, and shockwave KO's all minions and portals during the battle. But the ability can no longer be used after that.
Variant ability
Alpha- Ability Copy: Copies the target's abilities. Cannot copy the Corruptor's ability or those that ressurect enemies.
Beta- Timefreeze: Stops time for 10 seconds, but running into projectiles still causes damage.
Gamma- Holo-Clones: Creates a pair of Holographic clones that will automatically fight with you. If you take damage, the clones disappear, so be careful.
Delta- Reprogram: All Cyber-genesis enemies within 20 meters fight for you and their attacks do not harm you. Reprogramming wears off after 60 seconds.
Squad ability
Inherit: Xhonas inherits all passives abilities in the Squad for the rest of the level.
Passive ability
None. They must be inherited with the Squad Ability.

[Meatkill]

Skunio, the Volcanic Leviathan
Type:Ravager
Genesis:Plasma-Necro

Bio:Skunio was a normal person of the Apriston Empire. He was famous for discovering the cure to Crabarms Syndrome. But then, his life changed forever when the Darkspore invaded his homeworld. He had to go to hiding as he saw his fellow citizens fall one by one to this menace. Since he found a cure for Crabarms, maybe he can find a cure to the Darkspore! He joined the Darkspore resistance to fight along the Crogenitors. His left eye was cut off as he tried to fight off a Darkspore threat near Segex-6, his species' home planet. He replaced his destroyed eye with a modified scouter. He even modified this scouter to beam his soul into his mana chamber for reconstruction should he die. The mana chamber is in his ship, so he can stay close to the battle.
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Appearance:
Weapon:Fists

ABILITIES-----------------------------
Basic attack
Cursed Fists: 10% chance for curse, 100% crit on cursed enemies
Unique ability
Flamethrower: Fires a steady stream of fire that burns all enemies hit.
Variant ability
Alpha- Necrotic Disguise: Shape shift into your enemies and use their abilities against them!
Beta- Hypnosis: Makes nearby enemies fall asleep. Enemies that have been put asleep will fight for you.
Gamma- Magma Rush: Skunio turns all ground within 20 meters into lava, and it damages all non-plasma enemies that step on it.
Delta- Target Transfer: Makes an enemy indestructible, but causes all enemies not affected to focus all hostilities on that specific enemy, taking damage as much as they inflict to the baited enemy.

Squad ability
Doomsday Infect: Launches a virus that infects a single enemy, and when it dies, it releases 2 to 4 more viruses that will repeat the process. Can be endless.
Passive ability
Reblock: Skunio has a 20% chance of blocking an attack and relaunch it back at the enemy.

[Meatkill]

Could we get a link for the adventure, Meatkill?

Isn't the actual image itself the adventure? Just drag and drop into spore don't you?

Yes, you can drag-and-drop onto Spore. But you must have Dark Injection to see these creatures. Also, I made these in-game.

As In-game, I mean:
*I created a species on a planet, starting from Cell Stage, and advancing it to Space Stage.